Can I please hold an evaluation on this storyline for a book?
Hi,
I recently thought of an idea for a book.
It is about a girl who grows up knowing when, where on earth and how she will die (21st birthday). She knows this because she is a time traveller of sorts. If she meets somebody new who will eventually become crucial to her, after a certain amount of time or closeness of relationship (friendship, romantic, family) she will travel forwards in time to the last minutes of that person's energy. This is how she knows how she will die, because technically the first person you meet, is yourself. She see's herself die when she is 5 and that would be the prologue of the book, though unsurprisingly at the time readers wouldn't know that it is her dying. She is rather stand-offish to everybody for fear of getting close to somebody and seeing their demise. I want to incorporate romance but i do not know how the story can end happily in her loss, i also do not know how she will die.
Can somebody give me some advice please?
I am a year 10 high arts school student and i love writing and would like to have a try at writing something long term.
Thanks closely
Kat
Answers:
i like it, but you should of thought more roughly speaking it. kinda weird that she sees everybody die when she gets essential them or whatever, but i love it!! i know how you can include romance in this..... the person she loves tries to preserve her from dying, but every time it fixed another death trap appears for her. but when the person she loves, at the end, is suddenly the one to eradicate her, and he loves her. he kills himself for her. she cant live with him being out of her enthusiasm so she goes back in time to fix his mistake and she dies. when he comes rear legs to life he realizes what she did and thanks he surrounded by the heaven above and both live in each others dreams forever. im simply 13, but im really good at stories myself......TEE-HEE!!
In the prologue when your explaining her death, it could be her dying with someone else, but she doesnt know who they are. Then cut back to the present time and she meet someone who she falls in love with and tries not to get close but cant relieve herself. She doesnt see their death and thinks that maybe the curse is broken but later finds out that she has already seen their death, when she be 5, they are the person she dies with.
i like it :) . I also lve writing and that sounds amazing :). i think mabey she finds someone but trys to run away from him but somehow fate keep on matching them together, like magnets and dadadadadadadaadaaa then at the finishing shes 21 on the day she dies and he comes along and kindof saves her or somthing like let say shes in a car crash, and he stops the saloon? or he dies in her place like a sad love story so she be ment to drive the car, but before she jumps contained by the car, hes in there she tries to run after the coup¨¦ and tell him to not go in it afterwards he tells her he loves her then crashes and dies (she told him about how she dies erlier contained by the book) ? don't know if thats helpfull or not but hope it is :) xx Source(s): Me :L?
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I recently thought of an idea for a book.
It is about a girl who grows up knowing when, where on earth and how she will die (21st birthday). She knows this because she is a time traveller of sorts. If she meets somebody new who will eventually become crucial to her, after a certain amount of time or closeness of relationship (friendship, romantic, family) she will travel forwards in time to the last minutes of that person's energy. This is how she knows how she will die, because technically the first person you meet, is yourself. She see's herself die when she is 5 and that would be the prologue of the book, though unsurprisingly at the time readers wouldn't know that it is her dying. She is rather stand-offish to everybody for fear of getting close to somebody and seeing their demise. I want to incorporate romance but i do not know how the story can end happily in her loss, i also do not know how she will die.
Can somebody give me some advice please?
I am a year 10 high arts school student and i love writing and would like to have a try at writing something long term.
Thanks closely
Kat
Answers:
i like it, but you should of thought more roughly speaking it. kinda weird that she sees everybody die when she gets essential them or whatever, but i love it!! i know how you can include romance in this..... the person she loves tries to preserve her from dying, but every time it fixed another death trap appears for her. but when the person she loves, at the end, is suddenly the one to eradicate her, and he loves her. he kills himself for her. she cant live with him being out of her enthusiasm so she goes back in time to fix his mistake and she dies. when he comes rear legs to life he realizes what she did and thanks he surrounded by the heaven above and both live in each others dreams forever. im simply 13, but im really good at stories myself......TEE-HEE!!
In the prologue when your explaining her death, it could be her dying with someone else, but she doesnt know who they are. Then cut back to the present time and she meet someone who she falls in love with and tries not to get close but cant relieve herself. She doesnt see their death and thinks that maybe the curse is broken but later finds out that she has already seen their death, when she be 5, they are the person she dies with.
i like it :) . I also lve writing and that sounds amazing :). i think mabey she finds someone but trys to run away from him but somehow fate keep on matching them together, like magnets and dadadadadadadaadaaa then at the finishing shes 21 on the day she dies and he comes along and kindof saves her or somthing like let say shes in a car crash, and he stops the saloon? or he dies in her place like a sad love story so she be ment to drive the car, but before she jumps contained by the car, hes in there she tries to run after the coup¨¦ and tell him to not go in it afterwards he tells her he loves her then crashes and dies (she told him about how she dies erlier contained by the book) ? don't know if thats helpfull or not but hope it is :) xx Source(s): Me :L?
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