Does this nouns resembling a book you'd want to read? 10 points for best answer(a)!(a)!?

Here's the back of the cover I made. Should I change anything? Does it make you want to read it?

Annabeth is basically a ordinary girl in her small hometown. Or so she thought. Annabeth soon discovers that she is half wolf and can shape shift into one as she pleases. She decide she wants to master her new gift near the help from a wolf from a nearby pack. But when she’s forced with a verdict to put her life at risk in a giant battle for her investigational pack’s safety , will her clan succeed or will she lose everything. Join Annabeth in the adventure within Wolves Moon.
Answers:
i wouldn't want to
but that doesn't mean other population wouldn't
some people really like... wolves

but btw that reminds me of the twilight series
jacob.. wolf..
new moon.. wolves moon

and its not really a well brought-up thing that it does, cause that means its not really unproved.. and why read a twilight series ripoff when you can read the actual twilight series..

i dont think the synopsis you wrote is very good to be honest
the piece that stands out the most to me is
But when she’s forced with a decision to put her life at risk within a giant battle for her new pack’s safety, will her clan succeed or will she lose everything.
it doesn't nouns right.. you should make it into two separate sentences or at least end it next to a question mark.
Twilight twilight twilight !!
I dont think from the backcover I would read it. It sounds too much like everything else thats out. Put less info within that back and change it up. HOPE THIS HELPS!


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