For anyone next to a Worthy of Publishing description?

Would anyone like to check out the first chapter (and prologue, which is like 10 sentences long) of my book, The Stream Runs Dry? Will you comment? Thanks guys!
Answers:
Oh sure! What's your username? I'm *~openbook~* on there but none of my stories are public even so, but one soon will. Also, nice title. Catchy titles attract me to books :)


Related Questions:
Did Jacob Blacks mother really die contained by a vehicle chance or be she turned into a vampire?
I was reading Breaking Dawn and Jacob made it sound like his mother be turned to a vampire. Explain your opinion. | It does sound like something funky was going on beside his moms death. If she was not turned, at least...