What do you surmise of my final behaviour name for my book?
Main characters -
Paige Osbourne
Alex Osbourne
Autumn Flannery
Sam Flannery
Secondary Characters (important to the story but not major characters) -
Thaila Roscoe
Lexie Burnell
Phoebe Sullivan
Taylor Sullivan
The 'Peds' (The rival group) -
Evangelina Theron - Triplet 1
Andromeena Theron - Triplet 2
Angelita Theron - Triplet 3
Seraphina Theron - Triplets mother
Lucas Theron - Couisn of Triplets
Sebastian Theron - Cousin of Triplets
Others -
Jennifer Osbourne - Mother of Paige and Alex
Max Osbourne - Father of Paige and Alex / partner of Seraphina Theron
Do you think that the names are believable and credible?
The 'Peds' are all greek which is the reason for their different names? Do you assume they sound greek enough?
What are your opinions on my name in general? Do you think they will work?
Thank you :)
Answers:
I like them, the only one's i hold an issue with are Andromeena and Angelita. I think you should change them to something more fitting beside Evangelina.
I also think pay-as-you-go has a point. I mean, their name. We don't know if they fit the characters because you haven't wrote anything about them.
This sound out and others like it are a pointless waste of time and probably an ego massage.
"Look at me. I'm writing a book"
Who care what they are called as anybody can be called anything and if you're not happy near your name you can be change it by deed poll.
My pet name translated into English means "by or for God" and I'm an atheist.
Give us an outline of your plot and ask if that's believable!
The lone thing you may want to revisit is the triplets. if you have Evangelina and Andromeena, Angelita really doesn't fit. Maybe change Angelita to Angelina
Other than that I suggest all of the names work well!
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Paige Osbourne
Alex Osbourne
Autumn Flannery
Sam Flannery
Secondary Characters (important to the story but not major characters) -
Thaila Roscoe
Lexie Burnell
Phoebe Sullivan
Taylor Sullivan
The 'Peds' (The rival group) -
Evangelina Theron - Triplet 1
Andromeena Theron - Triplet 2
Angelita Theron - Triplet 3
Seraphina Theron - Triplets mother
Lucas Theron - Couisn of Triplets
Sebastian Theron - Cousin of Triplets
Others -
Jennifer Osbourne - Mother of Paige and Alex
Max Osbourne - Father of Paige and Alex / partner of Seraphina Theron
Do you think that the names are believable and credible?
The 'Peds' are all greek which is the reason for their different names? Do you assume they sound greek enough?
What are your opinions on my name in general? Do you think they will work?
Thank you :)
Answers:
I like them, the only one's i hold an issue with are Andromeena and Angelita. I think you should change them to something more fitting beside Evangelina.
I also think pay-as-you-go has a point. I mean, their name. We don't know if they fit the characters because you haven't wrote anything about them.
This sound out and others like it are a pointless waste of time and probably an ego massage.
"Look at me. I'm writing a book"
Who care what they are called as anybody can be called anything and if you're not happy near your name you can be change it by deed poll.
My pet name translated into English means "by or for God" and I'm an atheist.
Give us an outline of your plot and ask if that's believable!
The lone thing you may want to revisit is the triplets. if you have Evangelina and Andromeena, Angelita really doesn't fit. Maybe change Angelita to Angelina
Other than that I suggest all of the names work well!
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Any concept for a disturbing post-death ritual?
I'm working on fine tuning a book I hope to publish within the next few months. The antagonist, in the first draft of the story, among other things - took a piece from his victims and then stitched the skin back in place. Then I see Jeepers Creepers and the monster within that movie...