**IM ONLY 14... short poem! honest inference please!?
**i wrote this about hiding behind an identity... it's short..please any encouragemment, advice, or opinion!! (check out my others too!) =]**
I have seen the truth behind the lies you’re ably played act, drowned in disguise
Please forgive me if I’m mistaken, I’m only trying to say-so...
I feel as though you lost your true self somewhere along the way
The path of vivacity is winding and we all make wrong turns
It’s never too tardy to start all over, mistakes are how you learn
The time of a life is fragile and brief it’s not a theory test to pass It’s time for you let go of the lies...
I see right through your masquerade.
Answers:
I think it is very creative and brilliant!
very nice imagary, very economically written
i luv it! preserve up the good work :D
what i really like is that the poem is true.
learn to earn similar to a fern then when money like honey purs through the four tune in my tree
it is good. i liked it it had substance and your story was clear. however, you should equalize the stanzas. some stanzas trail to much farther than the others. for instance stanza one and stanza four, read them aloud and if you notice what i mean you should verbs to write poetry because that's good but the sound along with the writing is up-most considerable. good luck.
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Does The Beatles Abbey Road Melody recount a story?
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I have seen the truth behind the lies you’re ably played act, drowned in disguise
Please forgive me if I’m mistaken, I’m only trying to say-so...
I feel as though you lost your true self somewhere along the way
The path of vivacity is winding and we all make wrong turns
It’s never too tardy to start all over, mistakes are how you learn
The time of a life is fragile and brief it’s not a theory test to pass It’s time for you let go of the lies...
I see right through your masquerade.
Answers:
I think it is very creative and brilliant!
very nice imagary, very economically written
i luv it! preserve up the good work :D
what i really like is that the poem is true.
learn to earn similar to a fern then when money like honey purs through the four tune in my tree
it is good. i liked it it had substance and your story was clear. however, you should equalize the stanzas. some stanzas trail to much farther than the others. for instance stanza one and stanza four, read them aloud and if you notice what i mean you should verbs to write poetry because that's good but the sound along with the writing is up-most considerable. good luck.
Related Questions:
Does The Beatles Abbey Road Melody recount a story?
You know: You Never Give Me Your Money Sun King Mean Mr. Mustard Polythene Pam She Cam In Threw The Bathroom Window Golden Slumbers Carry That Weight and The End? | If it does,give me a big hit of that. The medley on Abbey Road does not tell a...