Do you similar to the Prologue?
There is a world intertwined with the human's world. A ruthless world all about period of war and death. Where vampires and werewolves despise each other and would do anything to destroy one another. This world consists of three law:
1) You must be loyal to each others species.
2) You must must not enter others territory.
3) You must not make contact or slump in love with anyone but your own species.
If any of the three laws are broken contained by any way the consequences are deadly and excruciating.
No vampire or werewolf has dare to brake the laws and for many centuries they haven't. But little do they know they're about to be....
Answers:
It sounds smaller number like a prologue and more like a preview. You know the previews I'm talking going on for.
"In a world . . . where people no longer exist . . ." You know what I'm talking roughly speaking, right? With the man in the deep voice saying it (who IS he??). It sounds a moment or two like that.
Prologues are supposed to be personalized. This is a bit like a summary or an advertisement for it. It would nouns better if it were more like, "In my/(insert name here's) world, ruthlessness is a commonplace entry." Or something.
Don't take offense, though. I think this is actually a dutiful idea, which is weird because I hate werewolves and vampires (Blame it on Meyer). It's simply a suggestion.
Hope I helped, honey!
Yes, I really do like it because it interests me ( Sci Fi/ Fantasy fan ) and that it patently makes me want to keep reading. Keep up the good work!
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1) You must be loyal to each others species.
2) You must must not enter others territory.
3) You must not make contact or slump in love with anyone but your own species.
If any of the three laws are broken contained by any way the consequences are deadly and excruciating.
No vampire or werewolf has dare to brake the laws and for many centuries they haven't. But little do they know they're about to be....
Answers:
It sounds smaller number like a prologue and more like a preview. You know the previews I'm talking going on for.
"In a world . . . where people no longer exist . . ." You know what I'm talking roughly speaking, right? With the man in the deep voice saying it (who IS he??). It sounds a moment or two like that.
Prologues are supposed to be personalized. This is a bit like a summary or an advertisement for it. It would nouns better if it were more like, "In my/(insert name here's) world, ruthlessness is a commonplace entry." Or something.
Don't take offense, though. I think this is actually a dutiful idea, which is weird because I hate werewolves and vampires (Blame it on Meyer). It's simply a suggestion.
Hope I helped, honey!
Yes, I really do like it because it interests me ( Sci Fi/ Fantasy fan ) and that it patently makes me want to keep reading. Keep up the good work!
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