Opinions please...?

Can you read the first three chapters of my book, No way out, on worthy of publishing? Comments either on here or on the website :)

http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/chapte…
Answers:
ok..
you kidding me?
i love it ... ^^
you gotta publish that ;]

and please *begging* can you email me or something when the next chapter is out :P:P:P
Some small errors, (not capitalizing your i's, some punctuation errors) but if you fix that right up I'd absolutely read.


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