What do you focus (10 points)?
Of my writing / book? It's a fantasy novel, and so far I have 3 chapter. Check it out:
http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.a…
An immediate 10 points goes to anyone who reads adjectives 3 chapters and gives me really good and detailed feedback (especially if you post that feedback on the comments on the website instead of here). Gluck and savour ;)
Answers:
I think you're over exaggerating the use of ten points.
But anyway, I've already read it before and I suggest it's quite good.
Awesome. Love the details and the way you used the characters emotions. Has a eragonish kinda vibe. Just keep hold of using the characters expressions and feelings. Also keep talking roughly speaking the setting and everything like that.
I just read the first chapter, and started on the 2nd.
All I have to say, is, I would buy this if it be published!
Post more chapters when you finish them!
I didn't read all of it, but what I did read be good.
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http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.a…
An immediate 10 points goes to anyone who reads adjectives 3 chapters and gives me really good and detailed feedback (especially if you post that feedback on the comments on the website instead of here). Gluck and savour ;)
Answers:
I think you're over exaggerating the use of ten points.
But anyway, I've already read it before and I suggest it's quite good.
Awesome. Love the details and the way you used the characters emotions. Has a eragonish kinda vibe. Just keep hold of using the characters expressions and feelings. Also keep talking roughly speaking the setting and everything like that.
I just read the first chapter, and started on the 2nd.
All I have to say, is, I would buy this if it be published!
Post more chapters when you finish them!
I didn't read all of it, but what I did read be good.
Related Questions:
What are some desperate heart touching books for teens?
Im 14. Ive been thru hella lot. been abused, moved constantly every year 4th, 5th, 6th, 7th. 8th, 9th all different school. moved to diff state was very difficult, i was never poor or a post issue like that it was just similar to my dad wanted to move somewhere moreexciting little did he...
Help near my The Crucible Essay? Cant construe of any examples for.?
Select 3 characters and show how they illustrate abuse of power(obviously abby and the girls but who else?)or..the crucible illustrates that peoples private motives often enjoy consequences far beyond their own lives. select three characters that depict this theme(once again obviously abby and the girls but i cant think of two...