Help next to my story anybody?
many ppl hav helped me w/ my story, and it's moving along, but I'm constantly finding things that I'm not sure if I should add surrounded by or not. if my main character is a KA super beautiful chick next to super powers but is not a hero but instead an ex-gang-leader turned into a CIA agent and goes to a boarding school to make an unknown antagonist come to her, what should go on in her love life? I want something imaginative and I'm not asking ppl to write the book for me - just a suggestion. the suggestions keep my brain moving :-)
thx for any help, and anybody who's creative, I'll consider those ppl first for best answer. thx again (and please don't answer "I'm not gonna write this for you" 'cause that's not what I'm asking you to do)
Answers:
I am boogy! Writer extrodinare (sort of)
WELLLLLLL.....i think that the bosses right appendage man should become a love atraction so that way at the end there is friction between his sides AND the betrayal of said -persons- person a CIA!
it sounds cool to me!
i would read this book for sure hers a good name for her love her love vivacity ian he works for the opposite side but loves her to death and she does not know that he works for the other side and he is to kill her and if he does not they will slaughter her for him will this get int thire love life or save thire time
age ?
name ian
tall drack and hadsom
answer mine please have same problem
Ooh! Her lover should be a hostage! And the hostage should be a spy for the antagonist. Nothing like good romance behind your leader's back. haha! I think that'd be really interesting. Are you getting it published? I would so read it!
yea, since your plot is crazy (superpowers/ex gang leader/cia agent...WOAH) have a normal love life. start within a relationship and maybe it breaks up cuz she turns into a CIA agaent and somehow that makes their relationship not work.
Sounds close to the normal Merry Sue crap that every teenager writes at some point.
Government agencies tend to not recruit gang member. Why would a CIA agent go to a boarding school, they would be kind of elderly and would stick out. How is her enemy unknown? What kind of villain would be at a boarding school anyways? Just ignore this story and try again.
Idea 1- Remember that show "Dark Angel" when the chic got in heat two times a year inflict that's how she was made, well your character could do matching thing cause that's how her power's made her in a sense. If you really want to see the episodes, rent "Heat" and "Meow" those kinda explain what she's fear when she's going through it. It is an uncontrollable sexual need.
Idea 2- Falls in love near another CIA agent, but she can't seem to forget her love for the guy who was in her gang. He is trying to bring her to come back to crime and the CIA agent guy is trying to love her and help her.
Of course you could put these two ideas together..eeh a moment ago watch the episodes and Logan can be like the CIA agent you know and the guy who created her can be like the gang guy.
hope this help Source(s): http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0204993/
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thx for any help, and anybody who's creative, I'll consider those ppl first for best answer. thx again (and please don't answer "I'm not gonna write this for you" 'cause that's not what I'm asking you to do)
Answers:
I am boogy! Writer extrodinare (sort of)
WELLLLLLL.....i think that the bosses right appendage man should become a love atraction so that way at the end there is friction between his sides AND the betrayal of said -persons- person a CIA!
it sounds cool to me!
i would read this book for sure hers a good name for her love her love vivacity ian he works for the opposite side but loves her to death and she does not know that he works for the other side and he is to kill her and if he does not they will slaughter her for him will this get int thire love life or save thire time
age ?
name ian
tall drack and hadsom
answer mine please have same problem
Ooh! Her lover should be a hostage! And the hostage should be a spy for the antagonist. Nothing like good romance behind your leader's back. haha! I think that'd be really interesting. Are you getting it published? I would so read it!
yea, since your plot is crazy (superpowers/ex gang leader/cia agent...WOAH) have a normal love life. start within a relationship and maybe it breaks up cuz she turns into a CIA agaent and somehow that makes their relationship not work.
Sounds close to the normal Merry Sue crap that every teenager writes at some point.
Government agencies tend to not recruit gang member. Why would a CIA agent go to a boarding school, they would be kind of elderly and would stick out. How is her enemy unknown? What kind of villain would be at a boarding school anyways? Just ignore this story and try again.
Idea 1- Remember that show "Dark Angel" when the chic got in heat two times a year inflict that's how she was made, well your character could do matching thing cause that's how her power's made her in a sense. If you really want to see the episodes, rent "Heat" and "Meow" those kinda explain what she's fear when she's going through it. It is an uncontrollable sexual need.
Idea 2- Falls in love near another CIA agent, but she can't seem to forget her love for the guy who was in her gang. He is trying to bring her to come back to crime and the CIA agent guy is trying to love her and help her.
Of course you could put these two ideas together..eeh a moment ago watch the episodes and Logan can be like the CIA agent you know and the guy who created her can be like the gang guy.
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