Anti-twilighters, what do you give attention to of this?

Ok, I recently finshed reading the book Twilight to see what the big deal was...and I thought it be the most ridiculous thing I have ever read.
I was really bored, so I wrote a short caricature of the book...Do you think it's completely stupid or funny or what? I'd appreciate some feedback. :)

http://www.booksie.com/humor/short_story…
Answers:
i thought that it was halarious. It be Amazing. You should write more!!
I haven't read the books, and own no desire to really after what I've heard, but that was pretty funny. Good work!
Twilight Fanatic Here-

I actually read your story, which I found quite interesting, and specifically shocking because I don't normally read people's stories on Y!A(some of them are really boring.) Anyways, I actually thought your story was really right. I don't really like it how you made Fred not sleep, I wish you kept him like a everyday human. That would have been so cute. Actually, that would have be totally copying Stephenie Meyer's idea just vice-versa. I just thought it get more and more interesting as I kept reading. I was rooting for Stella and Fred.

I was laughing at your character name. That was really funny. Anyways, I just thought I should let you know that you are a outstandingly talented writer. From this I can really tell. You should really write something of your own, and really write something not make fun, and your story could be a hit.

I really enjoy your story and keep up the good work.

Julianne T Source(s): LoveToReadandWrite
I'm a human!

I lol'd


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