From Martha Long's 3 books which one do you similar to best?

Ma, he sold me for a few cigarettes
Ma, i am getting meself a new mammy
Ma, its a cold night and i am looking for a bed

I like the first one

what roughly you?
Answers:
Ma, He Sold Me for a Few Cigarettes is the best of the three, but I can't say I was overly impressed with any of them.


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