Do you close to my story?
once there was a lady who have 4 kids sally molly and jack and nick .nick and jack were pious to each other they both like the same color black and sally and molly detested each other. molly was red sally was green molly favorite food be sushi and sally was pizza. so they did not talk that much but molly liked jack and sally like nick so one they they both went to first grade and not a soul liked sally all people like molly. so finally they grew for molly to say hay you want to color sure said sally and one day when nick broke within half jack homework for no reason they really started to hate respectively other and they did no talk at all. then molly and sally grew resembling evey one and nick said i'm sorry and now they all like each other. the end who was your favorite personage in the story and did you like it or not and what was your favorite part of a set
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i couldn't focus. Paragraph it, capitalize it, punctuate it.
That was quite possibly the longest run-on sentence I've ever tried to endure.
If this isn't a jape, I suggest you clean it up.
That includes fixing the grammar, punctuation, plot development, characters, and so on.
.. Good luck. Source(s): I'm giving you the benefit of a doubt that you're not a troll.
Yes, amazing. My favorite person was Molly because she sounds like a bitchhh similar to me :)
Best story I've ever read.
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i couldn't focus. Paragraph it, capitalize it, punctuate it.
That was quite possibly the longest run-on sentence I've ever tried to endure.
If this isn't a jape, I suggest you clean it up.
That includes fixing the grammar, punctuation, plot development, characters, and so on.
.. Good luck. Source(s): I'm giving you the benefit of a doubt that you're not a troll.
Yes, amazing. My favorite person was Molly because she sounds like a bitchhh similar to me :)
Best story I've ever read.
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