A story i am writing?
(it is a little bit strange so just give me an oppinion)
This is the story of Lila, for a moment circus girl, she was sold to the circus at the age of four and only has biddable memories about her past before the circus. She is the star, but she cannot really grasp that, generally because she is frequently beaten by the ring leader who thinks it will gross her better. Another preformer who cares about her very boomingly is forced to help in these beatings, he agrees to in part because he does not want them to go to far.
This other preformers name is Jack, and at some point he snaps and kills himself. This is the ultimate straw for Lila and she decieded to run away from the circus, and discovers the horrors of her past as well as the horror of poverty disease and violence. She realize how much she truly enjoyed helping people smile and forget their troubles through preformance and she comes back to the circus beside a new look on life
Answers:
That's a really good belief... I have only read a couple of books that have te circus type subject... so that will be very successful
It's a great start! I would definitely read this! To make it as real as possible, you might want to research circuses and how they lived, any lingo, etc. But this is a really good idea! I hope to see this in stores someday!
I think your plot is pretty interesting and I wouldn't mind reading it.
~good luck beside it. I've never really read a story about something like that before, I'm looking forward into audible range more.
I really like it and I know maybe my opinion don't be set to much I have a huge imagination too. I'm actually writing a story too.
It's different, I like it.
its cool and its very unique
P.S. please answer my examine and thxs!
I similar to the circus theme, but I think you need to rework your plot-line. The invective thing has been done opening too much, and it's not realistic that someone who cares for her would help pulsation her.
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This is the story of Lila, for a moment circus girl, she was sold to the circus at the age of four and only has biddable memories about her past before the circus. She is the star, but she cannot really grasp that, generally because she is frequently beaten by the ring leader who thinks it will gross her better. Another preformer who cares about her very boomingly is forced to help in these beatings, he agrees to in part because he does not want them to go to far.
This other preformers name is Jack, and at some point he snaps and kills himself. This is the ultimate straw for Lila and she decieded to run away from the circus, and discovers the horrors of her past as well as the horror of poverty disease and violence. She realize how much she truly enjoyed helping people smile and forget their troubles through preformance and she comes back to the circus beside a new look on life
Answers:
That's a really good belief... I have only read a couple of books that have te circus type subject... so that will be very successful
It's a great start! I would definitely read this! To make it as real as possible, you might want to research circuses and how they lived, any lingo, etc. But this is a really good idea! I hope to see this in stores someday!
I think your plot is pretty interesting and I wouldn't mind reading it.
~good luck beside it. I've never really read a story about something like that before, I'm looking forward into audible range more.
I really like it and I know maybe my opinion don't be set to much I have a huge imagination too. I'm actually writing a story too.
It's different, I like it.
its cool and its very unique
P.S. please answer my examine and thxs!
I similar to the circus theme, but I think you need to rework your plot-line. The invective thing has been done opening too much, and it's not realistic that someone who cares for her would help pulsation her.
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I have to do a book report. I want like a biography, or an autobiography. Or something that talks going on for someones life.I'm in the 8th grade, but my reading even is higher.Thanks. (: The Glass Castle by Jeanette Walls. It's really good. It's not that advanced but its kinda long.Or you could do the Diary...