Is this a apposite story subject matter?
ok its almost a twisted twilight
i havnt thought of character names so yea
ok so this chick lives in a place and she have her bff dude and he is lik normal and stuff then this dude moves in and comes to her university and he is in lik a pack (werewolves she doesnt know) and they r all hot and he sticks out and then lik they hav classes or something together to where on earth they meet each other somehow and then her bff disappears for lik a month and she starts to slop in luv wit the werewolf and then her bff comes back different (vampire again she doesnt know) and she think he is gorgous but she luvs the werewolf and she starts falling for her bff and she has no clue wat they really are. then it all comes at her at once and she doesnt believe any of it
thats adjectives i hav for now i cant think of an end
can u back me and plz tell me how my theme is
Answers:
i think it's a pretty devout theme, but i think you need more handling , like fights and all and possibly her bff would have a vamp pack too, just a sugestion, but i like it profusely:)
umm... kay this is total twilight/new moon here.
you just switched the character's roles around.
but if your writing is good, and it's not approaching actual copying
what with the whole "i would die for you"
or the "i die without you"
and why don't you try varying the mythical creatures around
or scrapping the mythical creature idea altogether?
Ummmm. I don't like it terrifically much. I'm gonna be honest so don't send me a hate mail! Does this story leak into the category of Twilight? Because I find it hard to believe that she first gets all lovey- dovey beside a wolf-boy, and then goes all goo-goo eyes of her BEST FRIEND of adjectives people! Instead of the dude being her BFF, make him the unmarked kid. Spice up the plot a little, and don't make him both a werewolf AND vampire. Just choose one! I prefer wolf boy! They're a lot hotter! So yeah, I'm not really lovin' it at the moment, but if you move some things around here and here, I think you'll end up with an amazing story! Also, enjoy you ever tried posting a story on FictionPress?
Here's a link: www.fictionpress.com
You can post your story here. I'd read it! Send me an E if you do!
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i havnt thought of character names so yea
ok so this chick lives in a place and she have her bff dude and he is lik normal and stuff then this dude moves in and comes to her university and he is in lik a pack (werewolves she doesnt know) and they r all hot and he sticks out and then lik they hav classes or something together to where on earth they meet each other somehow and then her bff disappears for lik a month and she starts to slop in luv wit the werewolf and then her bff comes back different (vampire again she doesnt know) and she think he is gorgous but she luvs the werewolf and she starts falling for her bff and she has no clue wat they really are. then it all comes at her at once and she doesnt believe any of it
thats adjectives i hav for now i cant think of an end
can u back me and plz tell me how my theme is
Answers:
i think it's a pretty devout theme, but i think you need more handling , like fights and all and possibly her bff would have a vamp pack too, just a sugestion, but i like it profusely:)
umm... kay this is total twilight/new moon here.
you just switched the character's roles around.
but if your writing is good, and it's not approaching actual copying
what with the whole "i would die for you"
or the "i die without you"
and why don't you try varying the mythical creatures around
or scrapping the mythical creature idea altogether?
Ummmm. I don't like it terrifically much. I'm gonna be honest so don't send me a hate mail! Does this story leak into the category of Twilight? Because I find it hard to believe that she first gets all lovey- dovey beside a wolf-boy, and then goes all goo-goo eyes of her BEST FRIEND of adjectives people! Instead of the dude being her BFF, make him the unmarked kid. Spice up the plot a little, and don't make him both a werewolf AND vampire. Just choose one! I prefer wolf boy! They're a lot hotter! So yeah, I'm not really lovin' it at the moment, but if you move some things around here and here, I think you'll end up with an amazing story! Also, enjoy you ever tried posting a story on FictionPress?
Here's a link: www.fictionpress.com
You can post your story here. I'd read it! Send me an E if you do!
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How to write resembling a proper author?
I hav never written a book before , but i hav a good idea and want to develop into a book. How can i do this. I similar to the style stephainie meyer writes in, its down to the point and it flows. How do you flow it its hard. i dont no please help you...
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