I want to break my book surrounded by partly, but I don't know if I could do it this track...?

Well, mainly, my book is split into two halves. The first is a part on earth, and the second on hell, but it's beside the same character. It's hard to explain presently, so I'll try my best.
The real ending (plus all the solutions) are on the second partially, the first sort of just gets Leo (my main character) from New York (his home) to Hell. Well, it's 200 000 words and someone told me I'd enjoy to either shorten it or break it in half if I want to publish. Well, I can't shorten it, but can I break it within half if the ending or extremely good sector comes in second? It's sort of like Cirque Du Freak. The first book takes Darren from humanity to vampirism. Can I do that near my character?
I'm writing a horror series anyway, so it wouldn't matter if I added a book, so what do you think?
Answers:
(I hope this is what you mean).

Instead of this huge, gelatinous book and getting it all in one, I would rather read it contained by two books.

If you left a good cliffhanger at the end of the book, it would engender i even more intriguing to read he next installment.

It sounds like you have a honest thing going (: Good luck. Source(s): Thanks for answering mine, anyone else?
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I suggest you go back and expurgate your story. No offense, but even if you don't spilt the book up, no one will continue reading if as you said, " the extremely good portion comes in second." And I understand what your saying in the order of splitting the book up, but you could have just said that you were told to break up your book, so partly was the sequel. :p


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