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Is this a dutiful prologue? I'm with the sole purpose a childlike writer?
“Eve! Evelyn? Come on, the party’s this way!” A girl with a stylish black perm and mischievous blue eyes listened as her boy call out. She couldn’t see him but his voice sounded slightly worried, and as much as she wanted to turn back around, something stronger urged...
Is this a fitting story theory?
Where the world is falling apart...and nobody is really noticing, but things have been getting progressively worse and a small group of teenagers enjoy been forced to save it? Or has it already be done? | Yeah, it's an idea. Don't think it's been done, but even if it have, yours would still be...
Is this A flawless Beginning!?
This is a story I am writing for a contest first prize is $200 which I really want (: So please tell me what is wrong and what is amazing about this story thanks Sam I be devastated. I couldn’t explain how I feel right now. I was lying within the large, black leather...
Is this a flawless origination?
“Bethany! Time to get up,” my mom said trying to get me up for the first day of academy. “Ugh. I’m up. I’m up.” “Go shower,” she demanded as she walked out of my bedroom. I took a long shower and then went to pick out my outfit. What to wear? What to wear?...
Is this a Good Story?!??!?!??!?
I Stared at the door, I could hear Girls on the other side Gossiping and Giggling. I dropped My Suitcase onto the floor, The Sound of it dropping was covered by My Stomach's Rumbling, I fell onto My Bed and Sighed. I took a Note out off my School Dress Pocket, Sweetheart, If you are...
Is this a honest belief for a story?
A girl in a small town goes missing. About a month later three kids(her brother,boyfriend, and best friend)get a entry in her handwriting. It tells them to go to the coffee house, sit within their booth, and look under the booth seat(or something like that). They all see respectively other and find the...
Is this a honest prologue?
The Assassins Code Prologue The year is 2012, the economy is finally back to normal after years of turmoil and business is booming contained by all sorts of trade. The date is 12th Feb and its 6:48am and a 37 year old detective, roughly 6”2ft named James Grimoire is asleep...
Is this a honourable outset for my story?
I have begun my story and want to check that my beginning is interesting. I'll let somebody know you what it's about etc then I'll tell the origination. It's about a boy (about 17) who lives with the travelling circus that includes a freak show. He's walking through the woods...
Is this a obedient begining to a book? PLEASE ANSWER?
Helloooo. My parents and my teachers along the years have alwayspulled me aside and urged me to become a writer. I never wanted to write, but ive be thinking ltely..is this a good beginning to a story or short book? Katie felt her means of access along the walls of...
Is this a obedient story. im surrounded by the middle of writing.. plz, no rude comments.?
the story is called Hidden Identity please no rude comments, im only 13 yrs old!! Selena Lithicum, 18, have a horrid past, searching through trees and leaves to find her way home. the forrest sounded as if it have horrifying screams running...
Is this a pious story so far?
Im 13 and i love to write i have about 2 paragraphs done on mibba please read my story and detail me wat you think of it thx (the link for the story is below) http://stories.mibba.com/read/210409/The-dark-side/ | woah, that was way too long t read - sorry. Although I did read the summary...
Is this a pious story string..?
I am writing a story and i am wanting opinions on the sotry line of it. I dont know how popular it would be in todays time tho lol.. Its give or take a few a 7 year old boy (dont have a name for him yet) and his parents be killed when he...
“Eve! Evelyn? Come on, the party’s this way!” A girl with a stylish black perm and mischievous blue eyes listened as her boy call out. She couldn’t see him but his voice sounded slightly worried, and as much as she wanted to turn back around, something stronger urged...
Is this a fitting story theory?
Where the world is falling apart...and nobody is really noticing, but things have been getting progressively worse and a small group of teenagers enjoy been forced to save it? Or has it already be done? | Yeah, it's an idea. Don't think it's been done, but even if it have, yours would still be...
Is this A flawless Beginning!?
This is a story I am writing for a contest first prize is $200 which I really want (: So please tell me what is wrong and what is amazing about this story thanks Sam I be devastated. I couldn’t explain how I feel right now. I was lying within the large, black leather...
Is this a flawless origination?
“Bethany! Time to get up,” my mom said trying to get me up for the first day of academy. “Ugh. I’m up. I’m up.” “Go shower,” she demanded as she walked out of my bedroom. I took a long shower and then went to pick out my outfit. What to wear? What to wear?...
Is this a Good Story?!??!?!??!?
I Stared at the door, I could hear Girls on the other side Gossiping and Giggling. I dropped My Suitcase onto the floor, The Sound of it dropping was covered by My Stomach's Rumbling, I fell onto My Bed and Sighed. I took a Note out off my School Dress Pocket, Sweetheart, If you are...
Is this a honest belief for a story?
A girl in a small town goes missing. About a month later three kids(her brother,boyfriend, and best friend)get a entry in her handwriting. It tells them to go to the coffee house, sit within their booth, and look under the booth seat(or something like that). They all see respectively other and find the...
Is this a honest prologue?
The Assassins Code Prologue The year is 2012, the economy is finally back to normal after years of turmoil and business is booming contained by all sorts of trade. The date is 12th Feb and its 6:48am and a 37 year old detective, roughly 6”2ft named James Grimoire is asleep...
Is this a honourable outset for my story?
I have begun my story and want to check that my beginning is interesting. I'll let somebody know you what it's about etc then I'll tell the origination. It's about a boy (about 17) who lives with the travelling circus that includes a freak show. He's walking through the woods...
Is this a obedient begining to a book? PLEASE ANSWER?
Helloooo. My parents and my teachers along the years have alwayspulled me aside and urged me to become a writer. I never wanted to write, but ive be thinking ltely..is this a good beginning to a story or short book? Katie felt her means of access along the walls of...
Is this a obedient story. im surrounded by the middle of writing.. plz, no rude comments.?
the story is called Hidden Identity please no rude comments, im only 13 yrs old!! Selena Lithicum, 18, have a horrid past, searching through trees and leaves to find her way home. the forrest sounded as if it have horrifying screams running...
Is this a pious story so far?
Im 13 and i love to write i have about 2 paragraphs done on mibba please read my story and detail me wat you think of it thx (the link for the story is below) http://stories.mibba.com/read/210409/The-dark-side/ | woah, that was way too long t read - sorry. Although I did read the summary...
Is this a pious story string..?
I am writing a story and i am wanting opinions on the sotry line of it. I dont know how popular it would be in todays time tho lol.. Its give or take a few a 7 year old boy (dont have a name for him yet) and his parents be killed when he...