Book and Authors Questions and Answers
What do you consider of my writing?
I'm 17 and i write for fun, wishing to get published one day. Tell me what do you presume of my skills.The girl walked down the street. Despite the light of a some lamposts standing at the sidewalk, she could see nothing. The murk that surrounded the whole area was so strong, that the flickering pale...
What do you consider of this plot?
So this is a *very* basic plot summary of my new book. I'm writing it with my friend. We're alternating chapter. It's written in first person and every other chapter is narrated by one of the characters (Jack and afterwards Chloe) She's writing Jack and I'm writing Chloe. Anyway, here's the summary:Boy (Jack) and girl (Chloe).
What do you consistency bout the finish of NEW MOON(BOOK)?
...well, i just wanna know your opinion... for me, i love subdivision that bella and edward were back together but i hate the truth that she dumped jacob contained by the end. .who care? I loved that Edward be back but i felt sooo sorry for poor Jacob. Bella just messed around...
What do you construe (10 points)?
Of my writing / book? It's a fantasy novel, and so far I have 3 chapter. Check it out: http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.a¡ An immediate 10 points goes to anyone who reads adjectives 3 chapters and gives me really good and detailed feedback (especially if you post that feedback on the comments on the website instead of here). Gluck and...
What do you construe of my prologue?
I'm 16, so it's not perfect. Also, the second and sixth paragraph should be in italics as they are flashbacks. Give honest feedback please.The deep blue side of the Pacific Ocean crashed over the rocky shoreline as I began to strip down to nothing but my boxer shorts. I became one next to nature, and slowly...
What do you construe of my story so far?
I sprinted faster down the winding road. A dark figure be coming into view. I paused to catch my breath. The coil whipped heavily around my black hair. ¡°Jake¡± I screamed but no-one answered. My heart thudded underneath my jacket. I began running again, picking up the pace. The dark digit got closer as...
What do you construe of my story so far?
This is just an excerpt from it anyway. I know there are mistakes in it, but it's lone part of the rough draft, so I will make it better when I get the vary. Thank you! http://courtneybellecullen.deviantart.co¡ Hi I like your story, a few things you should do is describe how the...
What do you construe of the preface of my book ?
Preface It was dark and all I could hear be the heavy breathing of the monster in front of me. I closed my eyes and this comforted me much more than I thought because when I closed my eyes I imagined that the monster was not my soul mate-just a monster that...
What do you construe of Twilight?
I'm very curious... Well I like it, & nothing more. Anything more would a moment ago be plain wired. Source(s): I read the whole saga i am reading it right now for a class in college in the order of vampire culture. it is ABSOLUTELY ridiculous. it basically like reading a 13 year old girl's fanfiction. its...
What do you contemplate of my plot for my new-fangled?
Okay so here it goes!Violet Sterling always knew she be different, but different enough to be a victim of disturbing murders? Violet has a morbid bygone, which only a few people know about. Her mind is available to memories from long ago; she can¡¯t even recall anything that happened five years ago. Day...
What do you contemplate of my story?? Please answer?
I have only just started but I plan to write something like this:A girl who goes to san fransico with her parents and sister to see her grandparentsshe loves scenery and time on her own so repeatedly goes to the country sideit's a calm story and set in gorgeous sceneswhen she goes to the...
What do you contemplate of this small prolouge?
Never had the sky looked so bright. Never had the seaside smelt so entirely of salt. Never have the grass been so green, and the city so grey.Never would Eli care.The prison had be torture, even for him, but after finally escaping Eli marvelled at its weakness. Walking up Tasmin Hill he did not take...
What do you contemplate will evolve surrounded by the 4th book of ERAGON? wanna hear your thoughts and opinion?
l absolutly adore Eragon. I'm obsessed. I have my own theories, but I want to hear yours too. This is the best book in the HISTORY OF THE WORLD! so if you don't similar to it, learn to love...
What do you deduce give or take a few the book, She Went All The Way by Meg Cabot?
I read this book recently, just wondering what anyone else thought I thought it was fairly good, the storyline was totally not what I was expecting, as I didn't know anything around the book when I began reading it, but I found it very...
What do you deduce of my prologue? Constructive opinion appreciated.?
Like I said before, this is just a prologue, the story is very different than what it seem. Tell me what you think, if I need more detail or whatever. Thanks.CONSTRUCTIVE critism is appreciated¡°One veggie burger, no bun, and two shots wheat grass,¡± Lily call out across the eatery. After the order had...
What do you deduce of my writing?
Here's a small bit of something I'm working on (a short story in several parts, im gonna put it on fictionpress when its done)In The Midst Of Conflict Comes LovePart 1. I who watches the starsAn exquisite moon, glimmering on the surface of the small pools of my eyes, reflecting yellow back at the round giant's...
What do you deem of my poem?
Just wrote it, so this is only a first draft, but what do you think?The shrill shrieks of hollow laughter ring throughoutWhile images spin through a pulsing body,And each breathe steals another piece of the core.Eyes made black from streaming eyes,And void smiles imbue the air,Fading into the abyss as quickly as they once arrived.Swirling tornadoes...
What do you deem of my qualities?
I'm writing a series of fantasy novels (ambitious for a 14 year old, but I do love writing). Here's a profile of my fundamental character. She does seem to have become fairly similiar to me, so I was wondering whether she was likeable and realistic...Title: HRH Princess Adawolfa of Teufel (nickname 'Ada' used...
I'm 17 and i write for fun, wishing to get published one day. Tell me what do you presume of my skills.The girl walked down the street. Despite the light of a some lamposts standing at the sidewalk, she could see nothing. The murk that surrounded the whole area was so strong, that the flickering pale...
What do you consider of this plot?
So this is a *very* basic plot summary of my new book. I'm writing it with my friend. We're alternating chapter. It's written in first person and every other chapter is narrated by one of the characters (Jack and afterwards Chloe) She's writing Jack and I'm writing Chloe. Anyway, here's the summary:Boy (Jack) and girl (Chloe).
What do you consistency bout the finish of NEW MOON(BOOK)?
...well, i just wanna know your opinion... for me, i love subdivision that bella and edward were back together but i hate the truth that she dumped jacob contained by the end. .who care? I loved that Edward be back but i felt sooo sorry for poor Jacob. Bella just messed around...
What do you construe (10 points)?
Of my writing / book? It's a fantasy novel, and so far I have 3 chapter. Check it out: http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.a¡ An immediate 10 points goes to anyone who reads adjectives 3 chapters and gives me really good and detailed feedback (especially if you post that feedback on the comments on the website instead of here). Gluck and...
What do you construe of my prologue?
I'm 16, so it's not perfect. Also, the second and sixth paragraph should be in italics as they are flashbacks. Give honest feedback please.The deep blue side of the Pacific Ocean crashed over the rocky shoreline as I began to strip down to nothing but my boxer shorts. I became one next to nature, and slowly...
What do you construe of my story so far?
I sprinted faster down the winding road. A dark figure be coming into view. I paused to catch my breath. The coil whipped heavily around my black hair. ¡°Jake¡± I screamed but no-one answered. My heart thudded underneath my jacket. I began running again, picking up the pace. The dark digit got closer as...
What do you construe of my story so far?
This is just an excerpt from it anyway. I know there are mistakes in it, but it's lone part of the rough draft, so I will make it better when I get the vary. Thank you! http://courtneybellecullen.deviantart.co¡ Hi I like your story, a few things you should do is describe how the...
What do you construe of the preface of my book ?
Preface It was dark and all I could hear be the heavy breathing of the monster in front of me. I closed my eyes and this comforted me much more than I thought because when I closed my eyes I imagined that the monster was not my soul mate-just a monster that...
What do you construe of Twilight?
I'm very curious... Well I like it, & nothing more. Anything more would a moment ago be plain wired. Source(s): I read the whole saga i am reading it right now for a class in college in the order of vampire culture. it is ABSOLUTELY ridiculous. it basically like reading a 13 year old girl's fanfiction. its...
What do you contemplate of my plot for my new-fangled?
Okay so here it goes!Violet Sterling always knew she be different, but different enough to be a victim of disturbing murders? Violet has a morbid bygone, which only a few people know about. Her mind is available to memories from long ago; she can¡¯t even recall anything that happened five years ago. Day...
What do you contemplate of my story?? Please answer?
I have only just started but I plan to write something like this:A girl who goes to san fransico with her parents and sister to see her grandparentsshe loves scenery and time on her own so repeatedly goes to the country sideit's a calm story and set in gorgeous sceneswhen she goes to the...
What do you contemplate of this small prolouge?
Never had the sky looked so bright. Never had the seaside smelt so entirely of salt. Never have the grass been so green, and the city so grey.Never would Eli care.The prison had be torture, even for him, but after finally escaping Eli marvelled at its weakness. Walking up Tasmin Hill he did not take...
What do you contemplate will evolve surrounded by the 4th book of ERAGON? wanna hear your thoughts and opinion?
l absolutly adore Eragon. I'm obsessed. I have my own theories, but I want to hear yours too. This is the best book in the HISTORY OF THE WORLD! so if you don't similar to it, learn to love...
What do you deduce give or take a few the book, She Went All The Way by Meg Cabot?
I read this book recently, just wondering what anyone else thought I thought it was fairly good, the storyline was totally not what I was expecting, as I didn't know anything around the book when I began reading it, but I found it very...
What do you deduce of my prologue? Constructive opinion appreciated.?
Like I said before, this is just a prologue, the story is very different than what it seem. Tell me what you think, if I need more detail or whatever. Thanks.CONSTRUCTIVE critism is appreciated¡°One veggie burger, no bun, and two shots wheat grass,¡± Lily call out across the eatery. After the order had...
What do you deduce of my writing?
Here's a small bit of something I'm working on (a short story in several parts, im gonna put it on fictionpress when its done)In The Midst Of Conflict Comes LovePart 1. I who watches the starsAn exquisite moon, glimmering on the surface of the small pools of my eyes, reflecting yellow back at the round giant's...
What do you deem of my poem?
Just wrote it, so this is only a first draft, but what do you think?The shrill shrieks of hollow laughter ring throughoutWhile images spin through a pulsing body,And each breathe steals another piece of the core.Eyes made black from streaming eyes,And void smiles imbue the air,Fading into the abyss as quickly as they once arrived.Swirling tornadoes...
What do you deem of my qualities?
I'm writing a series of fantasy novels (ambitious for a 14 year old, but I do love writing). Here's a profile of my fundamental character. She does seem to have become fairly similiar to me, so I was wondering whether she was likeable and realistic...Title: HRH Princess Adawolfa of Teufel (nickname 'Ada' used...