Book and Authors Questions and Answers

What do you reflect on of this intro?
Normally I'm into writing more adult-themed books, but I've made my first attempt at a Young Adult novel...Anywho, what do you guys think of this short excerpt? Does it fit the young adult area I'm aiming for?---I had no idea what everyone found so excruciatingly exciting about this trip. I didn¡¯t even want to be...

What do you reflect on of this slapdash paragraph of writing?
okay i just want some opions totally hate it or like it or love it? merely started putting pen to paper and came up with this. I slowly sulk into the classroom,; my lead down and my arms folded across my chest. I take my seat trying to make myself as small...

What do you reflect on of this story?
Chapter 1: Terminator¡¯s StoryDate: Oct. 27, 1997Time: 3:00 AMPlace: Gotham CityA bright light shines in the middle of Gotham Cemetery.The light destroys everything it touches¡­including the gravesite it¡¯s on top of¡­the gravesite of Martha Wayne, Bruce Wayne¡¯s past due mother. Thomas Wayne¡¯s gravesite, Bruce¡¯s late father, goes untouched. As the bright light diminishes, a man...

What do you regard as of my poem?
I just wrote it and this is only the first draft but what do you think?Melting away,Fading into the black,Stuck surrounded by this spotWith a cracked looking glass.Sincere despair,Cold shouldered shrugs,Stiff fingers pointWith matching ice heart.One last hope¡­Attempted escape.Shaking limbs crawl awaywith a presently concave body. I liked it; for a first draft I think...

What do you regard as of my story so far?
Chapter one Ever since I was a little girl I dreamt of falling in love near the perfect man. We would someday get married, and start a family of our own. Sometimes I still dream of have that life. But I suppose i just have to matter with what ive got. Dont...

What do you regard as of my story? What should I give?
It's about a 16 year old Madison in America, she lives beside her sister Emily 15 and her parents. it starts off when she has been grounded for letting her sister stir out late at night and drive when she doesnt have a lisencenext it moves on to the present time...

What do you regard as of my story?
It's a fanasty/thriller I'm writing called Othilo which is loosely based on Norse mythology. http://www.booksie.com/fantasy/novel/msv¡­ Feedback wanted. That was great. I in actual fact started to *really* dislike Candy...She's a *****! :) aw too long summarize ito and it seems too normal, im sorry it is a great story but the story chain just seems...

What do you regard as of my story?
Running, Yeah Right! My life is¡­ Different, weird, strange, peculiar, and fabulous! Don¡¯t get me wrong, in that are lots of problems, but my mom and I find a way to get through them, one way or another. I never thought we would come across a problem that front to pure hatred, but apparently...

What do you regard as of this Creature?
The Scrowngies.(Carnivores)They appear to be bird like creatures, with the obvious aptitude to fly - but what sets them apart? First off, they stand about two and a half foot tall, and they happen to own a long featherless tail. Their feathered bodies are a darkened blood color. Their eating beak on their obverse, and...

What do you regard of my story?
Everything happens in slow motion. A girl screams from the subsidise seat, there¡¯s a blinding flash of white light followed by a huge crunch, everything goes black. I rouse covered in sweat, tangled in the sheets, the nightmare of that lethal car crash replaying in my head as it does every darkness, like the image is...

What do you regard of my writing?
I stood at the gate of the cemetery; my hands dipped inside my mutton, black coat that stroked the ground beneath me whenever I walked. I looked at the breeze as it carried the orange, crumpled leaves through the black gate that have the iron at its middle reshaped on the form of a smiling demon.

What do you regard of my writing?
This is a children's story I created for a little girl my mother babysits. She loves anything that deals princesses and magical creatures. What are your opinions? I discern that it is lacking something.The story is about a young princess that falls asleep and awakes to find herself within magical land. Below is the part where...

What do you regard of these personality name ?
I know it's important to chose a fitting name for a character , so I would close to so opinions .So first off , there's this guy . He's very shy , calmness , sweet and he's a skater (skateboarding , not ice skating)I was thinking either Storm , Everest or Mac .

What do you regard of this excerpt? I hold a few question to ask :)?
I am writing a story through the eyes of for different girls (each from the same dormitory) and this is the start of my story, for the first girlTaylorOminous and looming, scary and ugly ¨C that¡¯s how I would enjoy liked to describe Tasmin¡¯s Ladies College of Melbourne,...

What do you regard of this story and the principal characters name?
Okay I'm writing this love story and I was wondering what you thought of the main characters names.They're name are Alicia Furnell and Adam Jenkins. hah funny. alicia is my best friends name and adam is her boyfriends name. Elaine Furnell and Adam Green sounds nice, but that's just in...

What do you ring a book beside no words?
What do you call a book with no words and contains only pictures? A picture book.Or an glib read :P a picture book :P whew that be a hard question!! :P please answer mine http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;¡­ Dee a picture book You call it a picture book. a pictorial Source(s): my brain..duh

What do you ring up the focus within literature when?.?
A character does something that they feel is morally wrong but legal (shooting a manic animal) not because he wants to but because of the pressure of other people and his integrity? hamartia (fatal flaw) Source(s): my brilliant daughter

What do you ruminate of the start of my story?
this is the introduction to i story i have been writing. please tell me what you deduce and whether you would keep reading. any constructive criticism is welcome. BeginningWe had freshly moved to Sydney and I remember feeling nervous. I was so strung-up I had spent the whole time since moving chewing my...